Once Upon A Dream III

This is the 2nd update of this manipulation. The first 2 were entered into the Men's Portrait challenge at

Although I have made the recommended changes, ie: fading the girl out a little to make the 'Dreamer' the main focus of the image, I have decided to leave my entry as it is for the challenge - simply because, although I know it is flawed, it is how I entered it and hopefully I may get fuller critiques when the challenge is over.

But please feel free to critique this new version... thanks