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Stargazing by cazcastalla Stargazing by cazcastalla
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Sky from :iconwyldraven: [link]

Model from :iconjaymasee: [link]

Star brushes from :iconkuschelirmel-stock: [link]
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:iconcrazypalette:
I really like the overall scene. :)
Although
1. The reflection seems brighter than the character, which never happens! Try to lessen the brightness a bit and add some lighting on the main character :D
2. The rocks you used in this picture has a different lighting angle than the composition itself, which is seeming very odd to the piece! Try a few other rocks which has back-lit lighting environment!
and 3. the stars are too blurry and dim. Make them more bright and crisp, I don't think they are blurred because it's not focused. If that was the case the moon would have also been blurred!

I really hope this helps. I don't write much critiques, since I don't like pointing out people's mistakes :S
But I really enjoyed your thoughts over this. So I suggested a few things!
I hope you don't mind :)
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:iconjaymasee:
Jaymasee Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
AMAZING!!!!!:love:
Thank you so much! :hug:
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SweediesArt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful :clap:
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:iconcazcastalla:
cazcastalla Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you :dance:
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:iconsweediesart:
SweediesArt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome:heart::hug:
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Stroody Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yes ....... A piece that tells a story accompanied with ambiance and beauty ......... Excellent work !
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cazcastalla Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Yayyy!!! Thanks for that great comment :woohoo:
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Doucesse Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful piece Carol ! :clap:
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cazcastalla Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Thank you :huggle:
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WannieWirny Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, amazing :D
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cazcastalla Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Thank you, and thanks for the fave :huggle:
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