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Submitted: January 12
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Stargazingby *cazcastalla

Digital Art / Photomanipulation / Conceptual

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Critique by ~majinprince Jan 13, 2013, 11:28:02 AM

I really like the overall scene.

Although
1. The reflection seems brighter than the character, which never happens! Try to lessen the brightness a bit and add some lighting on the main character

2. The rocks you used in this picture has a different lighting angle than the composition itself, which is seeming very odd to the piece! Try a few other rocks which has back-lit lighting environment!
and 3. the stars are too blurry and dim. Make them more bright and crisp, I don't think they are blurred because it's not focused. If that was the case the moon would have also been blurred!

I really hope this helps. I don't write much critiques, since I don't like pointing out people's mistakes :S
But I really enjoyed your thoughts over this. So I suggested a few things!
I hope you don't mind

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