Ok.... I am going to try to write my first ever critique here

Firstly, I love your choice of stock - it all goes together very well.

You have done very well with the ageing effect in general - the big point here is, if you take a look at old photos, they do not blur with age. Admittedly photos taken back then would be nowhere near as sharp as those taken using today's cameras, but I think there is a little too much blurring - not sure if it is possible/easy to reduce the blurring at this stage.

Over all, a very, very good manip for being so new to it.

I am sure I have missed some points, but I am not an expert manipulator myself - so I am only really critiquing the points I can see - hope you find this helpful